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Sample Paragraph Comparison

First Draft	After Using AES Feedback
But how did anime and manga evolve to where it is currently? Why do we recognize it through these specific art style and format choices? Well, the short answer is that it simply became that way through a long history of artists and influencers. However, there is much more that may answer even more questions revolving around who and what the major influencers were. Supposedly, the first example of manga appeared around 12th century in scrolls, usually made by monks or Buddhists, that used several examples of symbolism to get a point, or lesson, across to whoever the intended audience may have been.	But how did anime and manga evolve to where it is currently? Why do we recognize it through these specific art style and format choices? Where was it first discovered? Supposedly, the first example of manga appeared within the 12th century scrolls, usually made by monks or Buddhists, that used several examples of symbolism to get a point, or lesson, across to whoever the intended audience may have been.
Changes Illustrated After AES Feedback: Strikethrough=deleted, Bold=added, Italics=replaced
But how did anime and manga evolve to where it is currently? Why do we recognize it through these specific art style and format choices? Where was it first discovered? Well, the short answer is that it simply became that way through a long history of artists and influencers. However, there is much more that may answer even more questions revolving around who and what the major influencers were. Supposedly, the first example of manga appeared around within the 12th century in scrolls, usually made by monks or Buddhists, that used several examples of symbolism to get a point, or lesson, across to whoever the intended audience may have been.

First Draft	After Using AES Feedback
But how did anime and manga evolve to where it is currently? Why do we recognize it through these specific art style and format choices? Well, the short answer is that it simply became that way through a long history of artists and influencers. However, there is much more that may answer even more questions revolving around who and what the major influencers were. Supposedly, the first example of manga appeared around 12th century in scrolls, usually made by monks or Buddhists, that used several examples of symbolism to get a point, or lesson, across to whoever the intended audience may have been.	But how did anime and manga evolve to where it is currently? Why do we recognize it through these specific art style and format choices? Where was it first discovered? Supposedly, the first example of manga appeared within the 12th century scrolls, usually made by monks or Buddhists, that used several examples of symbolism to get a point, or lesson, across to whoever the intended audience may have been.
Changes Illustrated After AES Feedback: Strikethrough=deleted, Bold=added, Italics=replaced
But how did anime and manga evolve to where it is currently? Why do we recognize it through these specific art style and format choices? Where was it first discovered? Well, the short answer is that it simply became that way through a long history of artists and influencers. However, there is much more that may answer even more questions revolving around who and what the major influencers were. Supposedly, the first example of manga appeared around within the 12th century in scrolls, usually made by monks or Buddhists, that used several examples of symbolism to get a point, or lesson, across to whoever the intended audience may have been.